I don’t know why I didn’t think of this earlier….
If you can read this, you are on a select filter of people whose opinions I would value in helping me refine my writing. This, obviously, doesn’t oblige anyone to actually do so.
What I’ll do, I think, is give the sort of piece it is, length, and ask for comments for those available and willing to be literary guinea pigs. If you know you haven’t time or inclination, let me know and I’ll remove you so your flist doesn’t get spammed.