Critique Wanted

Title: Sight Unseen
Length: 1,100 words

romance with psychological horror elements

Comments screened so you can give me the email address and format you would prefer, if you are available.

10 thoughts on “Critique Wanted”

    1. Then I shall keep you on the filter, and there will be other stories. Sweat it not, oh beloved coyote.

      Your life has been sort of high-intensity of late; I would be astonished if you had free time to commit. 🙂

  1. send ‘er my way.. might get some time today:

    – I’m guessing you screened my previous reply too. 😀 … I also am going to be looking to send something off to a publisher in the fall. I like your style of writing, and personally I think you’ve got talent. (I don’t say that often). Anyway, I might ask one day for a return of the favor. If I can get off my arse and edit “Driven” – the 1st novel I wrote/finished and can’t seem to edit. As I mentioned I tend to be blunt, but won’t say: “I wouldn’t buy
    this”…. that’s not much help if you are serious about your work. I’m much more likely to say: Not sure about X. Can you clarify? Sentences too long. Confused here. Who is speaking? what’s the motivation? Can you expand this section. I’d like to see more/less in this. blah blah. you get the point. 😀


    1. Perfect, all the way through.

      In fact, returning the favor would be a pleasure; the reason I looked for you was that I enjoy your style of writing, and think that you’ve talent. (This meeting of the mutual admiration society is called to order….)

      So send it along. 🙂

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